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Liking it, But needs work

So i do like the animation, Most of it is smooth animation, however a few things that i want to point at that docked you some points.

Speling/Grammer: I Can not urge enough how much spelling and grammer can make or break and flash, Work on that and I think it will be more enjoyable.

Sound: Music was nice, However i think the DBZ animation sounds were a bit clitche, However I did like the fight scene,

Effects: The blood and such was a little.. Eh-ish, but you said you just started so, again it has potentail, just..you dont need so much blood XD. Clean up the art a bit and the other ones and im sure you'll do great. I'll be watching you ^^

..I happened to like it

Alright.. So maybe this isnt the best Flash out there. But I happened to think it was somewhat cute and intresting. Yes , the style may not be the best and at some points the animation is choppy however that doesnt make this a horrid flash. Honestly you gotta ignore the negitive comments because people don't know how hard a flash truly is to make. The other thing i think that can use improvment is the voices. alot of it was too quiet , and it could use a little more emotion, But other than that I really liked it. I look forward to seeing more of this. ^_^

I like the style

The Drawling style is nice, The plot is..well..could use a little improvement, The major downfall i see in this was the voice acting. Its not terrible, but it could use improvement.

Really...?

Offensive and cruel.

Good game

great game..But tank >.> ..yay for not being able to move for 4 turns in a row D=

awesome

addicintg game.. I cant seem to beat it under 21 days though